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Haiku.

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You’ve got a sore back?
And it’s hurt for the last month?
To triage with you.

Late night rescue call,
Respond Code Red to leg pain.
Really? 9-1-1?

The medics arrive -
CPR, ROSC.
But, is this a save?

Lorazapam huh?
Well, I think you took too much.
Hello, Ma’am? Wake up!

These kind of suck, but I was just reading about haiku and I got the itch.
I’d love to see yours. Remember, the pattern is 5 – 7 – 5.

Posted by on August 27, 2009 • Filed under: Uncategorized

2 Comments

  1. Walt Trachim says

    I really like the last one.

    That said, they're all good. The reference to Lorazepam made me chuckle….

    on August 28, 2009 @ 12:56 am.
  2. mack505 says

    Fun 7 cheezy, aren't they?

    I have a few to share:
    http://mack505.blogspot.com/search/label/haiku

    on August 28, 2009 @ 1:45 am.

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